Monday, February 29, 2016

Week 7 Reading Diary : West African Folktales

Stories from the West African Folktales Unit

How Wisdom Became the Property of the Human Race
I liked the concept of something imaginary and not tangible being in the pot. I would have thought that Anansi would have put something tangible, such as gold or food, in the pot to take away from those who offended him. Instead, I liked the ideal of wisdom being put into the pot. It is also ironic because he technically took wisdom away from everyone, including himself!

Anansi and Nothing
Oh the irony of the man Nothing! His name claims that he is nothing, but actually he is a man of riches and an abundance of wealth!

Thunder and Anansi
Anansi's selfishness is definitely portrayed well through this story. I mean why would you let your family starve and save all the food for yourself? I'm glad he returned him with many bruises, wishing he would have been more wise. 

Why the Lizard Moves His Head Up and Down
Wow, Anansi is ruthless! The lizard did disobey Anansi, but Anansi shouldn't have framed the lizard for the birds murder AND he shouldn't have "made the lizard dumb".  At the end of the story, it is concluded that ever since Anansi did this to the lizard, lizards always move their heads up and down. This could be fun to retell and create a new scenario for why simple things happen or how they started.

Why Spiders Are Always Found in Corners of Ceilings
Another story about why something is the way it is! I would have never thought that spiders, once men who betrayed others, were purposely put in the corner of the ceiling so no one else could see them. It would be interesting to make up another reason why spiders are in the dark corners of our ceilings!

The Squirrel and the Spider
Poor squirrel! Im glad the spider got what he deserved in the end! The quote, "he picked them up and, went off with them, leaving Spider and his children to return home sorrowful and empty-handed. Their thieving ways had brought them little profit," made me happy that the spider did not succeed in stealing the harvest! I also loved this adorable picture of the squirrel! So cute!

Squirrel


 West African Folktales by William H. Barker and Cecilia Sinclair, with drawings by Cecilia Sinclair (1917).

Friday, February 26, 2016

Week 6 Storytelling : The Stonecutter

"Alright honey, go get your PJs on and brush your teeth."

"If I do will you PLEASE read me a bedtime story?" begged the little girl.

"Honey it is WAY past your bedtime!"

"Please mom! Pretty Please! I can't go to sleep without one!"

The little girl's puppy dog face and big eyes gazed at her mother.  Her mother looked at the clock and let out a sigh. "Only one short one. ONE."

"YAY!" The little girl ran into her room, brushed her teeth, threw on her PJS, and jumped into bed. Her mom sat down on the soft pink comforter and opened up her Ipad. She scrolled through her list of favorite stories that consisted of mostly traditional fairytales. She came across the story, The Stonecutter and realized she had never read that one to her daughter before. She opened the story on the table and began to read.

Stone
"Once upon a time there was a man who was a stonecutter. He worked very hard to cut stones for a living. One day, after working very hard and feeling very tired, the stonecutter said, "I wish I was a rich man with a silky bed and gold tassels. I would be happy then." All of the sudden, the stonecutter heard a mysterious voice say, "Your wish is heard, a rich man you shall be!" The stonecutter went home that evening and found his house furnished with luxury and splendid furniture. The stonecutter thought he was happy, until one morning he glanced out of his window and saw a prince ridding in a carriage with servants shading him with an umbrella. "If only I was a prince with servants shading me with a fancy umbrella in my carriage, I would be a happy man!" The mysterious voice appeared again, " A prince you shall be!" The stonecutter became a prince and enjoyed riding in his carriage with his umbrella over his head. However, despite the umbrella shading him from the sun rays, the new prince's skin got darker and darker each day. He was angry about how powerful the sun was so he said, " The sun is mightier than I! I wish I were the sun!" And the spirit granted him his wish and the man became the sun. He would shoot his rays down on the people and the grass everyday, but eventually became discontent because of all the clouds that would block his view from the earth. "Oh how I wish I was a cloud, mightier than the sun!" And the spirit granted him his wish and the man became a cloud. He created rain storms that filled the lakes and rivers and destroyed all the towns and villages. The only thing that wasn't removed from his rain storms was the stone on the side of the mountain. The man said, "Is that rock mightier than I? I wish I was a rock!" The spirit said, '' Your wish is heard a rock you shall be!" The man loved being a rock. He could not be moved by the rain or the sun. "Now this is the life," the man said to himself. One day the man, now a rock, heard a strange noise and saw another stonecutter attempting to chop the rock in half. "Is this man mightier than a rock? Oh, if only I was a man again!" And POOF! He turned back into a man again. He returned to his old life again of hot, long, and sweaty work days, and never complained again about his life. The end."

"Wow mom! He was a lot of different objects!" exclaimed the little girl.
Sleepy Girl, By Andrew Stawarz 

"Yes he was. I wanted to read that to you because it had a great message," said the mom. "Don't be happy with what you don't have. Instead, be grateful of the things and life that you do and make the absolute most out of it."

The little girl smiled and curled up with her stuffed bear in her bed. Her mother kissed her forehead, turned off the lamp, and got up to close the door.

"I love you, sweetie."

"I love you too, mommy!"



Author's Note
I based this story of the story, The Stonecutter, from the Japanese Fairy Tale Unit. The original story is depicted through my retelling of the story. A man is unhappy with his life and asks a spirit to change him into different things, until he realizes that he is the happiest when he is himself. I decided to tell this story as a bedtime story because I think it is an easy story for children to understand, and also I think the message is important for children to learn. I basically summarized the exact plot of the original story through the mother, who was reading the original story to her daughter. I had fun writing this story and taking a different approach to it!


Source : Japanese Fairy Tales Unit.  The Violet Fairy Book by Andrew Lang, Illustrated by H. J. Ford 1901).  

Wednesday, February 24, 2016

Week 6 Reading Diary Continued : Japanese Fairy Tales

Schippeitaro 
I love that the dog and the young boy were both the heroes in this story and saved all the women of the village! Its crazy how a black cat was this mysterious spirit of the mountain who eats different girls in the coffin. I wonder what would have happened if the cat opened the casket and didn't see anything in there at all?

The Crab and the Monkey
I loved the two distinct animal characters in this story. The last time I read about a crab as a character in a fairy tale was in the Little Mermaid with Sebastian! I am so happy that the crab lived, got revenge on the monkey, and got her fruit tree back!

The Magic Kettle 
I think this story might have been my favorite in this whole unit! I love how an object turns into a tanuki, in my mind reminds me of a mix between an ocelot and a fox. I wonder what other objects and animals could be used in this story? I wonder what would have happened if the original old man didn't give away his kettle and I wonder what would happen if  Jimmu didn't return the kettle and act as an honest man?


Tanuki Tea Kettle


How the Wicked Tanuki was Punished 
I thought Tanukis were sweet and cute? Not in this story! It almost sounds like a family betrayal or something from the TV shows Pretty Little Liars or How to get away with Murder.  The little tanuki definitely outsmarted his dad and rightfully so due to the murder of his mother!


Japanese Fairy Tales unit. Story source: The Crimson Fairy Book by Andrew Lang and illustrated by H. J. Ford (1903).

Tuesday, February 23, 2016

Week 6 Reading Diary : Japanese Fairy Tales

The Two Frogs 
I liked how this story incorporated real cities in Japan, Osaka and Kyoto in this story along with links providing information about the two. I liked humor about the two frogs. I wish they really got to see each other's cities and not accidentally see their own!

The Stonecutter 
Loved this story! There was a great message behind the story, "Don't take anything for granted". I liked the various different things that the stonecutter asked to be turned into. From a prince to the sun to a rock and finally back to a man. Love who you are, what you do, and what you have!

The Maiden with the Wooden Helmet
I wonder what would happen if the girl took he wooden helmet off sooner? I wonder if she would have been treated differently. She was very modest with her beauty and it definitely benefited her in the long run! I feel like this symbolizes and portrays women in Asia somewhat. 

The Envious Neighbor
Humans and their dogs have such a powerful, loyal, and loving connection, and this story portrayed that perfectly! I felt happy when the dog found gold but I was so sad when the greedy neighbor kill him. The dog continued to be loyal (even in dog heaven) and helped his family find gold and riches and eventually gave the jealous neighbor what he deserved!

The Sparrow with the Split Tongue
Why would a wife be so jealous of her husband's happiness and affection to animals? Women are crazy! A "bad, hard-hearted women" is definitely a perfect way to describe her! I was caught off guard when the sparrow turned into a maiden, but how beautiful and grateful she was to be so kind to the old man who protected her! That is why the wife was so jealous and angry! The sparrow was a women! Loved the violent and descriptive ending of the serpents "darting poison in her veins". 

The Cat's Elopement 
I liked the use of the descriptive words used to illustrate a picture of the cats in my head. "Skin as soft and shinning as silk, and wise green eyes that could even see in the dark."  "She blinked her eyes so daintily, and ate her supper so tidily." What an adorable love story between two cats! It is a very different approach than any of the other stories I have read before this semester! I wonder what other animals would fit into this story? 



Gon & Koma


Source : Japanese Fairy Tales Unit.  The Violet Fairy Book by Andrew Lang, Illustrated by H. J. Ford 1901).  

Sunday, February 21, 2016

Thoughts About Comments

The comments that are different and not the same as everyone else's basic comments are the ones that are most useful and fun. It makes a comment really engaging when the reader talks about a specific part of your post and gives their opinions and honest thoughts about it. I think being honest, real, nice, and specific can help make comments really vivd and memorable. For example, quoting a specific line in a story and providing feedback can help the writer learn and grow as a writer and a blogger. I also think if something really strikes you, or if you find something awesome and great in a blog, being very descriptive with the tone and mood of words can really help the writer visual what you are attempting to say in person.

I have think I have been doing a good job with commenting so far. I am continuing to get better at making better, honest, and clearer comments to my classmates. I always tell them something I really liked ( or multiple things), and if I feel like there is room for improvement or changes, I give constructive criticism that is nothing but positive! I can maybe start describing specific parts or lines in others' stories to help them comprehend what stands out to a typical reader.

Week 5 : Famous Last Words

Famous Last Words

After reading many different stories within the past 2 weeks, I really liked the idea of modeling a story after a TV show. I just read a story based on the TV shows, "Days of our Lives" and thought it was very appropriate for the type of story they were telling. I have plenty of favorite reality shows, including the Bachelor, which is currently running. I just don't know how to start off my story and explain to my audience that the scene and setting is a TV show. I guess I think about it too much and complicate things. Many people have heard of or are familiar with many popular TV shows so I think I need to introduce the TV show setting quickly and briefly in order to keep my audience captive and interesting.

Some TV shows I have been considering modeling my storytelling stories in the future after include 

- The Bachelor / The Bachelorette (Probably best suited for drama between a love triangle)
- Grey's Anatomy ( Who doesn't love a McDreamy or McSteamy doctor?!)
- Gossip Girl ( I already did I story based off of this series but was disappointed in my work)
- Dallas Cowboy Cheerleaders : Making the Team (Big hair and Big kicks! Definitely more of a competition story setting)
- Deal or No Deal ( An old one but a favorite one! Could be kinda fun modeling a story after opening cases and seeing what the character receives!)
Meredith & Derek 

My goal is too eventually write a story modeled after one of these TV shows and hopefully make it good enough to want to add it to my portfolio! After I read the right story during my Tuesday/Wednesday reading units, I will know if it fits one of the above TV shows. It would be pretty fun to maybe do multiple ones using all of the above TV shows. 


Thursday, February 18, 2016

Week 5 Storytelling : And How Does That Make You Feel?

And How Does That Make You Feel?

The therapist glanced at the clock. An hour had passed since the session started. The client sat on the couch, twiddling her thumbs. The client had only been expressing how anxious, depressed, and worried she was about her kids for the past hour.

"Anything else you would like to talk about today?" questioned the therapist. "Maybe about what exactly happened to your husband?"

"I told you that he's dead," snapped the client.

"I know. We've already been over that. But I want to know what exactly happened. I promise there will be no judgment. I want to help you ."

The client sat on the couch silently, continuing to twiddle her thumbs. She was afraid to talk to someone, in a matter of fact anyone, about her husband's death. The depression and anxiety was killing and preventing her from caring for her seven daughters.

"How bad could it be? I suppose I would feel better," said the client.

"I'm all ears. Whenever you are ready," replied the therapist.

The client took a deep breath and stopped twiddling her thumbs. "Everything was normal. My husband went out to collect thorns for a living, like he always does, and the girls and I were doing our spinning work so that our family wouldn't starve to death."

"You and your seven daughters, correct?" asked the therapist.

"Yes, all of my seven daughters and I. But when my husband came back that night, he had some very exciting and bizarre news to tell me."

"What was the news?"

"He said he encountered a long lost sister that he never met before. He claimed that this sister left home when he was a baby and now she had come back to find him. My husband said that his sister was very rich and could bring us out of this poverty-stricken life," explained the client.

" How did that make you feel?"
" I was caught be off guard. I never knew he even had siblings," responded the client.

"So then what happened?"

" Well, he took us to her and to her home where she entertained us, gave us plenty of food, and provided us with nice clothes. Our bodies began to change. We weren't skin and bones anymore. For the first time in our lives, we were well-nourished and happy."

"So what changed?" asked the therapist.

"Some time passed and I wanted to repay my new sister-in-law by cooking her a nice dinner to thank her for her generosity and kindness. After making her a tasty dish, I sent my youngest daughter to deliver it to her."

"Then what happened?"

"My daughter ran back home bawling and screaming. I asked her what on earth was the matter. The terror I saw in her eyes still haunts me."

"Terror?" questioned the therapist.

"Yes. My daughter claimed that she saw that her aunt, transformed into a wolf, was eating a man."

"No..."

"Yep. So I told my husband that his sister was a wolf, disguised as a human. I tried to explain to him that the only reason we were well fed was so that she could fatten us up and devour us."

"What did your husband say in response?"

"He denied it. He was furious that I accused his sister of being a wolf. I insisted that we leave at once to avoid being killed."

"So did you leave?"

"He refused. No matter how many times I begged, he wouldn't believe me. So I took my seven daughters with me and we fled. Two weeks went by and I hadn't heard from my husband so I went back to see if he was okay."

"What did you find?" asked the therapist.
"Blood. Dark red blood. All over the floor of our house."

"Was it your husband's blood?"

"Yes."

"Oh my..."

 "My neighbor walked in when I was standing in the blood-stained house. He said he had come to deliver a package to my husband, and when he opened the door he saw a wolf devouring him."

"So you were right?"

"Yes. I almost wish I stayed and died with him. I don't know how my daughters and I are going to get over this."

The therapist looked at the clock. Two hours had passed since the start of the session.

"Your session has expired, but I won't charge you. Let's reschedule for tomorrow morning. We will work through this," said the therapist.

Wolf (by Arturo de Frias Marques)

Author's Note
I based this story off of the original story from the Persian Unit, The Wolf-Aunt . The original story is about a family, with seven daughters, that is very poor and has to work hard to keep from starving. One day when the husband is out working, he encounters a random woman who claims that she is his long lost sister and that she wants to help him and his family. The husband believes her and immediately tells his wife that his sister will save the family from poverty and starvation. The family goes to live with the new aunt and is treated very well, with new clothes and an abundance of food. To show gratitude for the new aunt, the wife sends her youngest daughter to deliver a home-cooked meal to the husband's sister. When the little girl arrives at the aunt's house, she peers into the door and sees the aunt, in the form of a wolf, eating a man. The little girl is scared and tells her mom what she had seen. The wife tells her husband that the family needs to leave town or they will be eaten by the wolf-aunt. The husband, fooled by his sister, refuses to leave. The wife and seven daughters leave town, and the husband stays and is eaten alive by the wolf-aunt. I decided to tell this story in the form of a therapy session. The wife, the client in the story, tells the story to her therapist and is very troubled by the murder of her husband. I added the neighbor into the story so that someone could tell the wife what her husband is dead. In the original story, the wife never came back to check on her husband. I thought that the wife should come back and check on her husband, and also prove that she is not heartless and cruel. I chose the title based on a redundant question that therapists asks their clients. I had fun writing this story in a therapy session along using back-and-forth dialect with the characters!

Persian Tales, translated by D.L.R. Lorimer and E.O. Lorimer and illustrated by Hilda Roberts (1919).

Wednesday, February 17, 2016

Growth Mindset : Grow in your other classes

I love a Challenge meme

Growth Mindset 

So for this week, I did the growth mindset challenge "Grow in your other clases". I thought about each class I am taking and the different challenges each class imposes. For example, my principles of personal training class is a lot more difficult than I thought! The first unit was basically a mini anatomy/physiology unit with a lot of detailed and intense science information. Not being an HES major, I struggled with this unit and really struggled on my first quiz. Since I knew this class was going to be hard, I decided to work a little extra, preparing for each class and studying everyday. I decided to enjoy this class and welcome the challenges that it brings. By doing this, I actually look forward to going to class, taking pages of intense notes, studying everyday, and looking up countless of information online to better understand the topics. AND because I accepted the challenge and learned to "roll" with it, I got a B on my first test and A's on the rest of the quizzes for that unit. I have learned so many new things and I can't wait for what the rest of the semester in that class has in store for me.


Tuesday, February 16, 2016

Week 5 Diary Reading : Persian Tales


For my reading diary this week, I choose to read Persian Tales  from the Middle Eastern Unit.


The Wolf and the Goat 
Mother goat is a tough and protective mother! She went straight after her kids and brought them back, killing the wolf at the same time. I wonder what the end of the story would be if the mother goat did not win?

Smithsonian National Zoo


The Boy Who Became a Bulbul
So strange that the father and son agreed to cut the other's head off. Who kills their son over firewood!? At least the sister was rewarded and the evil stepmother was punished. Stepmothers always seem to awful and evil. 

The Wolf Aunt
Always listen to your wife! Women are always right, haha ;) Loved this story! The story reminded me of the famous story of Hansel and Gretel. I thought the plot was very creative and very interesting. I wanted to keep reading and figure more out about this mysterious sister! It is a little eerie though. Glad the women and children got away, but man does that stink for the husband! 


The Sad Tale of the Mouse's Tail
Love the play on words in the title with "tale" and "tail". Love how the story keeps building from each of the requests of the different animals. I thought it was a great nursery rhythm. I wonder if the mouse ever got his tail sewed back on?


Source: Persian Tales Translated by D.L.R Larimer and E.O Lorimer, Illustrated by Hilda Roberts (1919).

Friday, February 12, 2016

Week 4 Storytelling : The Father, the Butler, and the two Sons

It was a rainy mournful day in New York City. The father of the wealthiest family in the city had passed away. His twin sons, Anthony and Logan, both 22, stood above his coffin at the funeral to say their last goodbyes. After their father was put to rest, the two sons walked away in distraught. Their butler, Henry, who served as a second father their whole life, walked with them to the family limo. 

"Well good thing Father left us an enormous trust fund to live off of for the rest of our lives so we don't have to worry about money," said Logan.

"Yes true, but I know your father wanted both of you to learn how to work at a real job and make your own wealth for your future families. The trust fund is a backup and should be a reward when you both had made your own way in life," explained Henry.

"Well each of our trust funds are left in our name, meaning we own the entire thing. I would like mine transferred to my bank account first thing tomorrow morning Henry," demanded Logan.
Trust Fund

"Yes, of course. Anthony, how about you?" asked Henry.

"Keep it in the trust fund account. I have a job interview tomorrow. I want to only use it if I have to," said Anthony.

The next day, Anthony dressed in his best suit and set out to JP Morgan Chase for his interview while Logan planned luxurious and extravagant parties every weekend for the next few months. Logan also purchased a private jet, 4 new sport cars, a private yacht,  and an abundance of designer clothes from 
Europe. 
JP Morgan Chas, New York (By Ben Sutherland)

Anthony was hired on and started his new 8 to 5 job. Henry was very pleased and helped Anthony complete projects, invest his money, start a new savings account, and live completely on his own.

Meanwhile, Logan continued to wallow in his trust fund. Continued to live at the family mansion, drink expensive champagne all day, and never lifting a finger to do anything product.

A few months went by and Anthony got promoted to CEO of JP Morgan Chase. His return on his investments were through the roof, and his savings account was so large that he would be able to solely live off of it for the rest of his life.  Anthony moved out of the family mansion and moved into his own mansion, one even bigger and luxurious than the family one. 

One morning, Henry went out to the outdoor private pool, to deliver a letter and some news to Logan.

"What's this?" interrogated Logan, holding the letter in his hand.

"It is a letter of eviction. You have spent all of your father's money he left behind and your trust own trust fund. You have 24 hours to move out. As for all of your things, they are being sold in order to pay off all the debt you owe," said Henry.

"WHAT! You cannot do that! That isn't possible! 

"Oh yes it is," laughed Henry.

"You can't leave me. Where do you think you are going to live and who do you think you're going to work for now?" yelled Logan.

"Oh that has already been arranged. I am serving as Anthony's butler and living in his brand new and very plentiful guest house. You won't be needing me anymore, goodbye Logan," said Henry as we walked away.

Logan was forced to move out and live on the streets due to his ack of his money and responsibly. 
Meanwhile, Anthony and Henry lived in his mansion together. Since Anthony worked for himself and made its own fortune, without touching his trust fund, Henry gave Anthony his father's secret account, which was worth way more than his trust fund. 

Needless to say, Anthony lived happily and comfortably for the rest of his life as a humble man.

Anthony's Mansion (by Jason Frye)


Author's Note
I wrote this story after the The King, the Hermit, and the two Princes by Maude Barrows Dutton. The original story is about a King who passes away and his friend, the Hermit, is left in charge of his treasure and is only allowed to give it to the son who goes through hardship, works, and becomes a noble man. The first son automatically assumes the role of king, while the other goes to the Hermit for advice and direction. The second son learns how to be a noble man and his rewarded the treasure. The other, blows all of the money and sends the kingdom into poverty and chaos. There is a reflection of a new king, and the noble bother wins. Anthony and Logan represent the two sons and Henry represents the Henry, the father's friend. Logan is the prince who blows all the money and doesn't work while Anthony makes a living for his own and moves up in life, being rewarded the ultimate treasure, his trust fund AND his father's secret account. I placed this story in New York City since it seems very prestigious and noble, just like a kingdom. Also, JP Morgan Chase is also a very prestigious company, perfectly suited for Anthony to work in.



Source : The King, the Hermit, and the two Princes.  (The Tortoise and the Geese and Other Fables of Bidpai by Maude Barrows Dutton,  with illustrations by E. Boyd Smith, 1908.)

Wednesday, February 10, 2016

Reading Diary Week 4 Continued : Fables of Bidpai


Fables of Bidpai Continued.


The Fox, the Hare, and the Wolf

How interesting that this story did a complete 180 at the end! I thought for sure the Fox was going to be devoured by the Wolf, but needless to say the Fox was definitely sly and had an escape plan in his back pocket. When the Wolf was described as "mouth-watering" I couldn't help myself but feel hungry for some chocolate while reading this! Poor Hare, but karma always wins!


Two Tortoise Stories
"Dashed to pieces" definitely painted a picture in my head of that poor Tortoise falling out of the sky and crashing onto the ground. At least the Geese were nice enough to attempt to take him with them!

Bugs in general are NOT my favorite at all. I am actually terrified of insects so it serves the tortoise right to shake off his "friend" who was trying to sting him. Love the animal relationships in these stories and this 2nd part of the story describes the Tortoise being in charge of the Scorpion and "shaking him off his shell" when the scorpion disobyed him. 

Love the connection and set up with the concept of "2 stories in 1".
Tortoise and the Geese (E.Boyd Smith, 1908)


The Lean Cat and the Fat Cat
I loved the line "With a purr of satisfaction", describing the happiness and response that the Lean Cat had. Instead of using said or another simply dialogue conversational response, the dialogue was written for the animal, describing how a cat would literally respond.

Three Fish
So basically the fish who was not very smart was caught and served for dinner. Again this story had characters in groups of 3's, with each character having their own personalities and identities. 

The Lion and the Hare
Interesting to see another Hare acting as a trickster, just like the Hare in the first story of this unit did. The Lion is a perfect fit for a king since the animal symbolizes power, strength, bravery, and a royal figure. Loving all the animals in the unit!

Story Source : The Tortoise and the Geese and Other Fables of Bidpai by Maude Barrows Dutton, with illustrations by E. Boyd Smith, 1908

Tuesday, February 9, 2016

Reading Diary Week 4 : Fables of Bidpai

For this week, I chose to read Indian themed stories from the Bidpai Unit .




Nightingale

I felt so bad for the Nightingale when she was caught in the cage. It was so sad when she asked the Rustic how bad his sin would be if he let her heart and her die in the cage. There was such a strange plot twist at the end. Gold? That's the last thing I would have expected the Nightingale to reward the Rustic with!



Poor Man, Rich Man, Young Man
Wow karma really does exist in these stories and rightfully so! The Rich Man definitely deserved to get his house burned down buy the sticks he barley paid the Poor Man for! Hah! Be careful what you say!

The King, the Hermit, and the Two Princes 
Gold Coin of King Kanishka
I love the continuing theme of characters coming in 3's. Each character's individual is told and they all come together to make up the complete package. My favorite was when the King told the Hermit,  "They both have a portion of their own, and when they have spent that, let them first taste of want and poverty. Then do you bring forth the treasure and give it into their hands. It may be that after they have once known a little hardship, they will live more wisely." Loved the message and the way it was portrayed. 


The Ass, the Lion, and the Fox
I liked how the Fox is the trickster in this story. The fox as an animal is percieved and described as sly and stealthy. The Fox in this story definitely carry's out those typical stereotypes. And for the Ass, well being overworked and seen as dumb is true and definitely breaks my heart!



Story Source : The Tortoise and the Geese and Other Fables of Bidpai by Maude Barrows Dutton, with illustrations by E. Boyd Smith, 1908

Sunday, February 7, 2016

Storytelling Week 3 : Zoology 1114



Zoology 1114


It was the first day of the new semester at the University. The cursed "if you walked underneath it" clock tower rang at every hour, playing the famous state song Oklahoma for all of campus to hear. The bike lane was congested with new freshman, confused why they were almost killed while walking to their first day of class. 


Bike Lane, (Source OU Daily)

Adam, a freshman, was excited for his first day of college. He crossed the busy intersection on Lindsey that separates the South Oval from the dorms, and strolled into Dale Hall with a rush of excitement and nervousness. 

He logged onto Ozone to see which room number his first class, Zoology 1114, was located. 

"Ah! 212. I think that means second floor," pondered Adam. He made his way up the crowded stars, swung a left, and found himself standing outside of an enormous and old lecture room.

Timidly, Adam looked around for a familiar face to sit with on the first day. Feeling flustered because he did not know a single soul in the room, he quickly found a seat in the middle of the room, hoping to blend in with others.

As the clock struck 10:30, the Professor stood on the stage in front of the rookie students, patiently waiting for their undivided attention. 

"Hello, everyone. My name is Greg-Orey Donalds. I will be your professor for Zoology 1114. Now this class..."


The Professor's voice was cut off as the big doors in the back swung open. 


A young and beautiful girl walked in. Her cheeks were red from the embarrassment of walking into class late.


"Sorry I'm late," mumbled the girl.


"Oh no worries! Everyone is forgiven on the first day. Looks like there is only one open seat left, over there in the middle."

Dale Hall

Adam glanced to his right and noticed that the open seat was next to him. The girl started to shuffle across the room to the open seat. She sat down, accidentally nudging Adam's arm with her backpack.


"I'm so sorry!"


"No you're fine! First days are always awkward. I'm Adam."


"I'm Eve. Nice to meet you."


"This class is very hard and will require a lot of studying. I promise to make Zoology 1114 interesting and enjoyable, as long as you all give 100%. I do have one rule though : Do not, use, share, or distribute test files to others. I know that my tests are on the internet and I ask that you not look for them or use them. If you do, there will be consequences. Deal? Alright, let's take a look at the first chapter," said the Professor.


Three weeks went by, and Adam and Eve enjoyed seeing each other every Tuesday and Thursday in class. They had the same interests and got along very well.


During the fourth week, the Professor announced that the first exam would take place in a week. "Please study hard and I will see you all next Thursday."



(The Bizzell Memorial Library by Michael Barera)

A swarm of nervous freshman students walked out of Dale Hall that morning. Eve said goodbye to Adam and walked towards the Bizzell Library to hit the books.


Strolling along, Eve heard someone hollering her name. "Eve! Eve! Wait up!" It was Steve Serpent, the Alpha Sigma Phi pledge. 


"Hey Steve! What's up?" 


"Oh nothing, just going to see my frat brothers at the Union. What are you doing later?"


"Just studying. I'm heading to the Biz now to get started for the big Zoo test coming up."


"Oh. You're actually going to study?" asked Steve.


"Well yeah of course! I really want to get into med school!"


"Don't waste your time. Enjoy college. I have the test files for all of the zoology tests. Just look over them and you'll ace it."


"No I can't! That is against the rules and is an academic integrity issue. I'm sorry but I can't give in!" Eve said sensibly.


"Oh come on. Alpha Sigma Phi is having a HUGE party tonight and I would love for you to make it. There will be jello shots, beer pong tournaments, and a margarita machine. You are  young and in college for only four years. Have some fun. You can attend med school when you are old."

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"Alright, fine! I suppose it wouldn't hurt to have a little help," said Eve.

"Sweet! I'll email them to you and can't wait to see you at the huge party tonight!"


The test file put Eve's mind to ease and relieved the pressure to get an A. She couldn't help but share her secret with Adam. She liked Adam and thought he was cute. She emailed him the files and Adam too felt a weight lifted off of his shoulders.



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Next Thursday rolled around and the mob of naive freshman entered Dale Hall, carrying number 2 pencils and green scantrons. 

"You have the whole class period to finish the test. Eyes on your own papers. Good luck!" said the Professor.


Adam and Eve both breezed through the test and walked out of the room relieved and confident.


That is, until they both received an email from the Professor on Friday morning, instructing them to meet him in his office immediately.


Adam and Eve walked cautiously into Professor Greg-Ory Donald's office and took a seat. 



OU Campus (by Nicholas Benson) 

"Do you know why you are in here?" asked the Profesor. Adam and Eve exchanged looks and then stared at the Profesor silently.

"You both cheated by studying test files instead of actually studying the material. I had one rule in my class and you both broke it."


"Eve,you fell into temptation by accepting test files from other students and passed it along to Adam."


"And Adam, you fell into temptation by using and accepting the test files Eve sent to you."


"You both knew this was wrong and instead you both did it. Now there is going to be severe punishment. Eve, you will be rejected from every med school you apply to. And Adam, you will endure very painful and awkward job interviews for a minimum wage job. This consequence will now apply to anyone who uses test files in the future."


And from that day forward, many students received rejection letters from medical school and encountered uncomfortable job interviews for low-paying jobs.



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Author's Note: I based this storytelling off the original Biblical story Adam and EveI kept the two main characters (Adam and Eve) the same from the original story. I also told the story in the same order as the original story. However, I did change some factors of the plot. For instance, I changed the scene from Garden of Eden to an OU Campus setting, involving typical freshman experiences such as the cursed clocked tower and the mistake of walking in the bike lane. The Professor symbolizes God and I modeled him after the great professor, Dr. Doug Gaffin of Zoology. In my opinion, Dough Gaffin was the "god" of zoology when I took the class my freshman year. He was a hard teacher, but also one of the most favorite professors on campus. If you look closely, all of the capitalized letters of the professor's name are capitalized, and when put together they spell out GOD : Greg-Ory Donald. When I refer to him as just Professor, the "P" in professor is always capitalized due to God's name always being capitalized in writing. Steve Serpent represents the serpent who tempted Eve to eat the fruit from the tree. In my story, Steve persuades Eve to break the rule and use the test files. Since God inflicted the punishment of painful labor on Eve and all women to come, Eve in this story (and all future "wanna be" med student) were punished too. I had a lot of fun writing this story in a real life setting!



Thee original story is part of the Bible Women unit. (Original Story source: King James Bible (1611): Genesis 2 and Genesis 3.)