Monday, February 29, 2016

Week 7 Reading Diary : West African Folktales

Stories from the West African Folktales Unit

How Wisdom Became the Property of the Human Race
I liked the concept of something imaginary and not tangible being in the pot. I would have thought that Anansi would have put something tangible, such as gold or food, in the pot to take away from those who offended him. Instead, I liked the ideal of wisdom being put into the pot. It is also ironic because he technically took wisdom away from everyone, including himself!

Anansi and Nothing
Oh the irony of the man Nothing! His name claims that he is nothing, but actually he is a man of riches and an abundance of wealth!

Thunder and Anansi
Anansi's selfishness is definitely portrayed well through this story. I mean why would you let your family starve and save all the food for yourself? I'm glad he returned him with many bruises, wishing he would have been more wise. 

Why the Lizard Moves His Head Up and Down
Wow, Anansi is ruthless! The lizard did disobey Anansi, but Anansi shouldn't have framed the lizard for the birds murder AND he shouldn't have "made the lizard dumb".  At the end of the story, it is concluded that ever since Anansi did this to the lizard, lizards always move their heads up and down. This could be fun to retell and create a new scenario for why simple things happen or how they started.

Why Spiders Are Always Found in Corners of Ceilings
Another story about why something is the way it is! I would have never thought that spiders, once men who betrayed others, were purposely put in the corner of the ceiling so no one else could see them. It would be interesting to make up another reason why spiders are in the dark corners of our ceilings!

The Squirrel and the Spider
Poor squirrel! Im glad the spider got what he deserved in the end! The quote, "he picked them up and, went off with them, leaving Spider and his children to return home sorrowful and empty-handed. Their thieving ways had brought them little profit," made me happy that the spider did not succeed in stealing the harvest! I also loved this adorable picture of the squirrel! So cute!

Squirrel


 West African Folktales by William H. Barker and Cecilia Sinclair, with drawings by Cecilia Sinclair (1917).

Friday, February 26, 2016

Week 6 Storytelling : The Stonecutter

"Alright honey, go get your PJs on and brush your teeth."

"If I do will you PLEASE read me a bedtime story?" begged the little girl.

"Honey it is WAY past your bedtime!"

"Please mom! Pretty Please! I can't go to sleep without one!"

The little girl's puppy dog face and big eyes gazed at her mother.  Her mother looked at the clock and let out a sigh. "Only one short one. ONE."

"YAY!" The little girl ran into her room, brushed her teeth, threw on her PJS, and jumped into bed. Her mom sat down on the soft pink comforter and opened up her Ipad. She scrolled through her list of favorite stories that consisted of mostly traditional fairytales. She came across the story, The Stonecutter and realized she had never read that one to her daughter before. She opened the story on the table and began to read.

Stone
"Once upon a time there was a man who was a stonecutter. He worked very hard to cut stones for a living. One day, after working very hard and feeling very tired, the stonecutter said, "I wish I was a rich man with a silky bed and gold tassels. I would be happy then." All of the sudden, the stonecutter heard a mysterious voice say, "Your wish is heard, a rich man you shall be!" The stonecutter went home that evening and found his house furnished with luxury and splendid furniture. The stonecutter thought he was happy, until one morning he glanced out of his window and saw a prince ridding in a carriage with servants shading him with an umbrella. "If only I was a prince with servants shading me with a fancy umbrella in my carriage, I would be a happy man!" The mysterious voice appeared again, " A prince you shall be!" The stonecutter became a prince and enjoyed riding in his carriage with his umbrella over his head. However, despite the umbrella shading him from the sun rays, the new prince's skin got darker and darker each day. He was angry about how powerful the sun was so he said, " The sun is mightier than I! I wish I were the sun!" And the spirit granted him his wish and the man became the sun. He would shoot his rays down on the people and the grass everyday, but eventually became discontent because of all the clouds that would block his view from the earth. "Oh how I wish I was a cloud, mightier than the sun!" And the spirit granted him his wish and the man became a cloud. He created rain storms that filled the lakes and rivers and destroyed all the towns and villages. The only thing that wasn't removed from his rain storms was the stone on the side of the mountain. The man said, "Is that rock mightier than I? I wish I was a rock!" The spirit said, '' Your wish is heard a rock you shall be!" The man loved being a rock. He could not be moved by the rain or the sun. "Now this is the life," the man said to himself. One day the man, now a rock, heard a strange noise and saw another stonecutter attempting to chop the rock in half. "Is this man mightier than a rock? Oh, if only I was a man again!" And POOF! He turned back into a man again. He returned to his old life again of hot, long, and sweaty work days, and never complained again about his life. The end."

"Wow mom! He was a lot of different objects!" exclaimed the little girl.
Sleepy Girl, By Andrew Stawarz 

"Yes he was. I wanted to read that to you because it had a great message," said the mom. "Don't be happy with what you don't have. Instead, be grateful of the things and life that you do and make the absolute most out of it."

The little girl smiled and curled up with her stuffed bear in her bed. Her mother kissed her forehead, turned off the lamp, and got up to close the door.

"I love you, sweetie."

"I love you too, mommy!"



Author's Note
I based this story of the story, The Stonecutter, from the Japanese Fairy Tale Unit. The original story is depicted through my retelling of the story. A man is unhappy with his life and asks a spirit to change him into different things, until he realizes that he is the happiest when he is himself. I decided to tell this story as a bedtime story because I think it is an easy story for children to understand, and also I think the message is important for children to learn. I basically summarized the exact plot of the original story through the mother, who was reading the original story to her daughter. I had fun writing this story and taking a different approach to it!


Source : Japanese Fairy Tales Unit.  The Violet Fairy Book by Andrew Lang, Illustrated by H. J. Ford 1901).  

Wednesday, February 24, 2016

Week 6 Reading Diary Continued : Japanese Fairy Tales

Schippeitaro 
I love that the dog and the young boy were both the heroes in this story and saved all the women of the village! Its crazy how a black cat was this mysterious spirit of the mountain who eats different girls in the coffin. I wonder what would have happened if the cat opened the casket and didn't see anything in there at all?

The Crab and the Monkey
I loved the two distinct animal characters in this story. The last time I read about a crab as a character in a fairy tale was in the Little Mermaid with Sebastian! I am so happy that the crab lived, got revenge on the monkey, and got her fruit tree back!

The Magic Kettle 
I think this story might have been my favorite in this whole unit! I love how an object turns into a tanuki, in my mind reminds me of a mix between an ocelot and a fox. I wonder what other objects and animals could be used in this story? I wonder what would have happened if the original old man didn't give away his kettle and I wonder what would happen if  Jimmu didn't return the kettle and act as an honest man?


Tanuki Tea Kettle


How the Wicked Tanuki was Punished 
I thought Tanukis were sweet and cute? Not in this story! It almost sounds like a family betrayal or something from the TV shows Pretty Little Liars or How to get away with Murder.  The little tanuki definitely outsmarted his dad and rightfully so due to the murder of his mother!


Japanese Fairy Tales unit. Story source: The Crimson Fairy Book by Andrew Lang and illustrated by H. J. Ford (1903).

Tuesday, February 23, 2016

Week 6 Reading Diary : Japanese Fairy Tales

The Two Frogs 
I liked how this story incorporated real cities in Japan, Osaka and Kyoto in this story along with links providing information about the two. I liked humor about the two frogs. I wish they really got to see each other's cities and not accidentally see their own!

The Stonecutter 
Loved this story! There was a great message behind the story, "Don't take anything for granted". I liked the various different things that the stonecutter asked to be turned into. From a prince to the sun to a rock and finally back to a man. Love who you are, what you do, and what you have!

The Maiden with the Wooden Helmet
I wonder what would happen if the girl took he wooden helmet off sooner? I wonder if she would have been treated differently. She was very modest with her beauty and it definitely benefited her in the long run! I feel like this symbolizes and portrays women in Asia somewhat. 

The Envious Neighbor
Humans and their dogs have such a powerful, loyal, and loving connection, and this story portrayed that perfectly! I felt happy when the dog found gold but I was so sad when the greedy neighbor kill him. The dog continued to be loyal (even in dog heaven) and helped his family find gold and riches and eventually gave the jealous neighbor what he deserved!

The Sparrow with the Split Tongue
Why would a wife be so jealous of her husband's happiness and affection to animals? Women are crazy! A "bad, hard-hearted women" is definitely a perfect way to describe her! I was caught off guard when the sparrow turned into a maiden, but how beautiful and grateful she was to be so kind to the old man who protected her! That is why the wife was so jealous and angry! The sparrow was a women! Loved the violent and descriptive ending of the serpents "darting poison in her veins". 

The Cat's Elopement 
I liked the use of the descriptive words used to illustrate a picture of the cats in my head. "Skin as soft and shinning as silk, and wise green eyes that could even see in the dark."  "She blinked her eyes so daintily, and ate her supper so tidily." What an adorable love story between two cats! It is a very different approach than any of the other stories I have read before this semester! I wonder what other animals would fit into this story? 



Gon & Koma


Source : Japanese Fairy Tales Unit.  The Violet Fairy Book by Andrew Lang, Illustrated by H. J. Ford 1901).  

Sunday, February 21, 2016

Thoughts About Comments

The comments that are different and not the same as everyone else's basic comments are the ones that are most useful and fun. It makes a comment really engaging when the reader talks about a specific part of your post and gives their opinions and honest thoughts about it. I think being honest, real, nice, and specific can help make comments really vivd and memorable. For example, quoting a specific line in a story and providing feedback can help the writer learn and grow as a writer and a blogger. I also think if something really strikes you, or if you find something awesome and great in a blog, being very descriptive with the tone and mood of words can really help the writer visual what you are attempting to say in person.

I have think I have been doing a good job with commenting so far. I am continuing to get better at making better, honest, and clearer comments to my classmates. I always tell them something I really liked ( or multiple things), and if I feel like there is room for improvement or changes, I give constructive criticism that is nothing but positive! I can maybe start describing specific parts or lines in others' stories to help them comprehend what stands out to a typical reader.

Week 5 : Famous Last Words

Famous Last Words

After reading many different stories within the past 2 weeks, I really liked the idea of modeling a story after a TV show. I just read a story based on the TV shows, "Days of our Lives" and thought it was very appropriate for the type of story they were telling. I have plenty of favorite reality shows, including the Bachelor, which is currently running. I just don't know how to start off my story and explain to my audience that the scene and setting is a TV show. I guess I think about it too much and complicate things. Many people have heard of or are familiar with many popular TV shows so I think I need to introduce the TV show setting quickly and briefly in order to keep my audience captive and interesting.

Some TV shows I have been considering modeling my storytelling stories in the future after include 

- The Bachelor / The Bachelorette (Probably best suited for drama between a love triangle)
- Grey's Anatomy ( Who doesn't love a McDreamy or McSteamy doctor?!)
- Gossip Girl ( I already did I story based off of this series but was disappointed in my work)
- Dallas Cowboy Cheerleaders : Making the Team (Big hair and Big kicks! Definitely more of a competition story setting)
- Deal or No Deal ( An old one but a favorite one! Could be kinda fun modeling a story after opening cases and seeing what the character receives!)
Meredith & Derek 

My goal is too eventually write a story modeled after one of these TV shows and hopefully make it good enough to want to add it to my portfolio! After I read the right story during my Tuesday/Wednesday reading units, I will know if it fits one of the above TV shows. It would be pretty fun to maybe do multiple ones using all of the above TV shows. 


Thursday, February 18, 2016

Week 5 Storytelling : And How Does That Make You Feel?

And How Does That Make You Feel?

The therapist glanced at the clock. An hour had passed since the session started. The client sat on the couch, twiddling her thumbs. The client had only been expressing how anxious, depressed, and worried she was about her kids for the past hour.

"Anything else you would like to talk about today?" questioned the therapist. "Maybe about what exactly happened to your husband?"

"I told you that he's dead," snapped the client.

"I know. We've already been over that. But I want to know what exactly happened. I promise there will be no judgment. I want to help you ."

The client sat on the couch silently, continuing to twiddle her thumbs. She was afraid to talk to someone, in a matter of fact anyone, about her husband's death. The depression and anxiety was killing and preventing her from caring for her seven daughters.

"How bad could it be? I suppose I would feel better," said the client.

"I'm all ears. Whenever you are ready," replied the therapist.

The client took a deep breath and stopped twiddling her thumbs. "Everything was normal. My husband went out to collect thorns for a living, like he always does, and the girls and I were doing our spinning work so that our family wouldn't starve to death."

"You and your seven daughters, correct?" asked the therapist.

"Yes, all of my seven daughters and I. But when my husband came back that night, he had some very exciting and bizarre news to tell me."

"What was the news?"

"He said he encountered a long lost sister that he never met before. He claimed that this sister left home when he was a baby and now she had come back to find him. My husband said that his sister was very rich and could bring us out of this poverty-stricken life," explained the client.

" How did that make you feel?"
" I was caught be off guard. I never knew he even had siblings," responded the client.

"So then what happened?"

" Well, he took us to her and to her home where she entertained us, gave us plenty of food, and provided us with nice clothes. Our bodies began to change. We weren't skin and bones anymore. For the first time in our lives, we were well-nourished and happy."

"So what changed?" asked the therapist.

"Some time passed and I wanted to repay my new sister-in-law by cooking her a nice dinner to thank her for her generosity and kindness. After making her a tasty dish, I sent my youngest daughter to deliver it to her."

"Then what happened?"

"My daughter ran back home bawling and screaming. I asked her what on earth was the matter. The terror I saw in her eyes still haunts me."

"Terror?" questioned the therapist.

"Yes. My daughter claimed that she saw that her aunt, transformed into a wolf, was eating a man."

"No..."

"Yep. So I told my husband that his sister was a wolf, disguised as a human. I tried to explain to him that the only reason we were well fed was so that she could fatten us up and devour us."

"What did your husband say in response?"

"He denied it. He was furious that I accused his sister of being a wolf. I insisted that we leave at once to avoid being killed."

"So did you leave?"

"He refused. No matter how many times I begged, he wouldn't believe me. So I took my seven daughters with me and we fled. Two weeks went by and I hadn't heard from my husband so I went back to see if he was okay."

"What did you find?" asked the therapist.
"Blood. Dark red blood. All over the floor of our house."

"Was it your husband's blood?"

"Yes."

"Oh my..."

 "My neighbor walked in when I was standing in the blood-stained house. He said he had come to deliver a package to my husband, and when he opened the door he saw a wolf devouring him."

"So you were right?"

"Yes. I almost wish I stayed and died with him. I don't know how my daughters and I are going to get over this."

The therapist looked at the clock. Two hours had passed since the start of the session.

"Your session has expired, but I won't charge you. Let's reschedule for tomorrow morning. We will work through this," said the therapist.

Wolf (by Arturo de Frias Marques)

Author's Note
I based this story off of the original story from the Persian Unit, The Wolf-Aunt . The original story is about a family, with seven daughters, that is very poor and has to work hard to keep from starving. One day when the husband is out working, he encounters a random woman who claims that she is his long lost sister and that she wants to help him and his family. The husband believes her and immediately tells his wife that his sister will save the family from poverty and starvation. The family goes to live with the new aunt and is treated very well, with new clothes and an abundance of food. To show gratitude for the new aunt, the wife sends her youngest daughter to deliver a home-cooked meal to the husband's sister. When the little girl arrives at the aunt's house, she peers into the door and sees the aunt, in the form of a wolf, eating a man. The little girl is scared and tells her mom what she had seen. The wife tells her husband that the family needs to leave town or they will be eaten by the wolf-aunt. The husband, fooled by his sister, refuses to leave. The wife and seven daughters leave town, and the husband stays and is eaten alive by the wolf-aunt. I decided to tell this story in the form of a therapy session. The wife, the client in the story, tells the story to her therapist and is very troubled by the murder of her husband. I added the neighbor into the story so that someone could tell the wife what her husband is dead. In the original story, the wife never came back to check on her husband. I thought that the wife should come back and check on her husband, and also prove that she is not heartless and cruel. I chose the title based on a redundant question that therapists asks their clients. I had fun writing this story in a therapy session along using back-and-forth dialect with the characters!

Persian Tales, translated by D.L.R. Lorimer and E.O. Lorimer and illustrated by Hilda Roberts (1919).